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Compartment 114
Welcome Back

Welcome Back

A Poem by lauren emily
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So here you are again, love

Penetrating the thin shield I had put between you and I

Somehow you managed to lighten up my day again

You are the only sun in my sky

Welcome back, my dear

Are you really here to stay forevermore?

I don't think I could survive in your absense again..

My heart has become very fragile, you see

It would not survive the next downpour

Say that this time is different, my sweet

Say that you promise things will never change

Promise me the life I had with you before

The life before things became so very rearranged

I know I shouldn't welcome you back, dearest

I know I shouldn't let you back in like this

But somehow this time seems different..

And I feel nothing but bliss..

So welcome back, my love

Are you really here to stay forevermore?

I don't think I could survive in your absense again..

My heart has become very fragile, you see

It would not survive the next downpour..

Do I trust you?

 

© 2009 lauren emily


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great!! loved the flow and the style!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is quite beautiful. You certainly have great talent and promise as a poet, which makes me eager to read more. :o)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Now theres the real question, Do I trust. Excellent write.

~L~

Posted 15 Years Ago


good flow of words, excelent imagery and feeling i get in this!

-Will

Posted 15 Years Ago


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lauren emily
lauren emily

Long Beach, CA



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Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16. I love writing, good food, fast cars, interesting people, cemeteries, photograp.. more..

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