Welcome Back
A Poem by
lauren emily
Please ignore spelling errors...
So here you are again, love
Penetrating the thin shield I had put between you and I
Somehow you managed to lighten up my day again
You are the only sun in my sky
Welcome back, my dear
Are you really here to stay forevermore?
I don't think I could survive in your absense again..
My heart has become very fragile, you see
It would not survive the next downpour
Say that this time is different, my sweet
Say that you promise things will never change
Promise me the life I had with you before
The life before things became so very rearranged
I know I shouldn't welcome you back, dearest
I know I shouldn't let you back in like this
But somehow this time seems different..
And I feel nothing but bliss..
So welcome back, my love
Are you really here to stay forevermore?
I don't think I could survive in your absense again..
My heart has become very fragile, you see
It would not survive the next downpour..
Do I trust you?
© 2009 lauren emily
Reviews
great!! loved the flow and the style!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is quite beautiful. You certainly have great talent and promise as a poet, which makes me eager to read more. :o)
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is quite beautiful. You certainly have great talent and promise as a poet, which makes me eager to read more. :o)
Now theres the real question, Do I trust. Excellent write.
~L~
Posted 15 Years Ago
Now theres the real question, Do I trust. Excellent write.
~L~
good flow of words, excelent imagery and feeling i get in this!
-Will
Posted 15 Years Ago
good flow of words, excelent imagery and feeling i get in this!
-Will
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Added on October 5, 2009
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lauren emily Long Beach, CA
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Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16.
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