![]() Take Me AwayA Poem by lauren emily![]() This took me SO long to write(well, actually, not really. Only about an hour and a half. But it seemed like MUCH longer. haha) Hope you enjoy :)![]() Fly away with me, my darling
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The font and....style of this didn't really turn out the way I wanted it to...:/
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Reviews
like everyone else---I love it! It makes me wanting to experience something that great...if that makes sense.
Posted 14 Years Ago |
You can really feel the true love falling off the page here.
Wonderful work Lauren! Antonio Posted 14 Years Ago |
absoulutely....incredible.....Lauren, this was AMAZING. seriously I'm speechless... :D
Posted 14 Years Ago |
awsome it was really romantic and i think it had a very good flow, very good write and im glad that u have more writing so i can read that, awsome write.
Posted 14 Years Ago |
i enjoyed this poem.:) it felt like a soft wind breezing through me and in a good way. the flow was wonderful and sweet. keep it up.:)
Posted 15 Years Ago |
Very beautiful and smooth flowing.
Soft, passionate and sooo romantic. Keep up the good work, you could have a great future with it. Posted 15 Years Ago |
I loved the poem. It was sweet and very nice.
I enjoyed it soo much that I read it three times! Again, I enjoyed it. Awesome poem. Posted 15 Years Ago |
It turned out just fine to me. There is a very smooth flow to your poem. Almost like calm ocean waves lapping against the shore. I really enjoyed this peace. It spoke to me and what it said was good. I'm excited to read more of your stuff!
Posted 15 Years Ago |
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8 Reviews
Added on August 21, 2009
Last Updated on August 21, 2009
8 Reviews
Added on August 21, 2009
Last Updated on August 21, 2009
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lauren emily
Long Beach, CA
About
Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16. I love writing, good food, fast cars, interesting people, cemeteries, photograp.. more..Writing
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