I Refuse Fate

I wrote this out of frustration..

My fate has been placed out for me

They have told me that this is how it must work

But I don't like this situation

And they know it, yet they stand there and smirk.

I refuse to go along with this!

I refuse to let this be!

I do not like this one bit,

I really do disagree.

My life has been set into stone

They have put it there with no intention of fixing it

I refuse to watch it play!

I refuse to give up this fight for myself and quit!

So now I must go

and undo what has been done

I'm out to change the way my life has been

and stop what has begun.

I will succeed in this journey!

I will not give up with fight!

I'm out to stop what I don't like

and replace it with the right.

 

Author's Note

Ignore spelling and grammar..this is a rough draft

Reviews

[Kiara]

great message : )
i really liked this poem
nice flow, and rythm
thanks for sharing!
-arabella

[Pakino]

Like I said to someone else recently after my martial art practice " Channel Your frustration to positivity. Do not vent out anger. Use your anger to change yourself."

[Spoken]

Fate can be a terrible prison, often we do feel we are simply watching the movie of our life play out never really having a hand.. I applaud your strength to stand up and say "no, I'm in control" an admirable characteristic well defined in your words!

[Dalaina Renee]

Never give up! Keep on going! Good message!

[JohnL]

You wrote this "out of frustration". you say. What a good way to GET out of frustration - Write your way out of it. I think you have the character to stand up to frustration and be pro- active in the fight - not to run away but crack it on the nose. Please let us see this poem when it comes out of rough draft, because it's pretty good now!
John

[Mysty Rayn]

This is great. You put a lot of feeling into this. I've been here. It gets better. Head up.

[W.Piggy]

Great poem. I really like it.
I'm 13 too, but you write so much better than me. :D
I think you're a really great writer. Keep it up. :D

[Aileen]

wow powerfull. i like it. never let anyone set ur desteny. and never let anyone change who u r. i luv it. and never let anyone tell u wut to do. tht probly y i'm always introubl w/ my parents. lol
keap up th great job.
luv ya
Aileen

[siri]

that poem is freakin sick great job it flows perfectly and was super fun to read it kinda reminded me of dr suess when i was reading it....high five!

[shinybluestars03]

Great poem
it flows very nicely.
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes