I Would Like

I Would Like

A Poem by lauren emily
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I was getting really frustrated with things that I couldn't have so I thought I'd write about it

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I want to fly on a plane

I want to go to Rainforest Cafe

I want to finish my book

I want to learn how to be a professional cook

I want to travel the sphere

I want a real writing career

I want to go to Scotland

I want to go to Disneyland

I want to get a ring that doesn't turn my finger green

I want to see my book on the big screen

I want to drink some passion fruit tea

I want to have people agree with me

I want to have my ideas be allowed

I want what I want, and I want it right now!

© 2008 lauren emily


Author's Note

lauren emily
Sorry for being selfish and stuff and forgetting the things I already have..but sometimes a person has to vent! lol

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I have been lucky in the sense that I have gotten most things I want. Though perhaps, it is just a case that I deny myself those things that I do not think I can easily get. It was a cute list, and I hope that is not offensive. It is playful and joyous, and it is not really asking for too much... I dread what my list would look like if I were to get out of the way of it...

Posted 16 Years Ago


lol! This is cute .... and understood! Yes, we all have a list... checking it twice! Three times, four... and many more.

I enjoyed this Lauren :) Now just put it into action girl..!!

Hope the vent helped ! Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


LOL, this is so cute! What a pleasant way to vent, in poetry! And it rhymes even! Wonderful job. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


LOL, I love this. It's written with such honesty and conviction. The best things is that you are still able to have all those things and many more. Life is too short to give up on dreams, so you vent all you want hun, and then when you are done, write a REAL list of all you want in life, and start ticking it off one by one. XX

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 17, 2008

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lauren emily
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Long Beach, CA



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Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16. I love writing, good food, fast cars, interesting people, cemeteries, photograp.. more..

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