Just the Little Things

Just the Little Things

A Poem by lauren emily
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Just a thought..

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The simplest things

are the ones we love the most.

We seem to love them,

to cherish them and hold them close.

 

The little things

are the ones we seem to care for.

We want to hold them always,

they are the things we adore.

 

The oddest expresstions of gratitude

are the things we admire.

We long for them the most,

they are the ones we truely desire.

 

The smallest acts of kindness

are the things we seem to crave.

We are easily filled by their presence,

a very pleasant feeling they gave.

 

The simplest things

are the ones we love the most.

We seem to love them,

to cherish them and hold them close.

 

© 2008 lauren emily


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Lovely poem. Simple and meaningful. I enjoyed reading it. Thanx! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very good. It's so simple yet it grabbed my attention while I was reading it! It's so unique how a writer can write a great poem by just looking at themselves and the world around them. All it takes is a little passion for a poem to be fantastic. Great Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is just lovely Lauren ! :)

Truly...

Your rhyme and flow are quite good as well!
I enjoyed this... great job!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Lovely sweet poem. I enjoyed reading about the things we care the most about, you put it all very nicely. Great flow and so meaningful. A very nice read and write. ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm glad that you sent me this read review. I wrote of "the simple things" some time before. I wrote about how they were the things that I cherrished. Your poem sums that up nicely. I thought that it was flowy and simple.

Nice job.

--vk

Posted 16 Years Ago


Its really sweet and thoughtful. I enjoyed it. And I wish people would cherish the little things more.... Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is so sweet. Great write. So much insight.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a fantastic poem, and an even better reminder. With todays technology and materialistic society, it's so easy to forget the simple joys of life.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on August 14, 2008

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Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16. I love writing, good food, fast cars, interesting people, cemeteries, photograp.. more..

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