I Was Reminded

Umm..yeah. I don't really know what to say about this. Just..randomness

I thought I had forgotten

In the little time you had been gone,

The wonderful feeling you left me with

The staying up until dawn.

 

I thought the memoires had been taken

In the time which you weren't there,

The perfect sensation in my heart

The tender loving care.

 

I was reminded again

In one message filled with hope,

A few simple words were said

And I was again able to cope.

 

I was brought back up to air again

My lungs were filled with your sweet scent,

I had almost forgotten all the time gone by

My head too full of joy to remember that horrible event.

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar and stuff.

Reviews

[Tony Hwilka]

A very smooth and simple poem, that's the way to write. Good work. Tony

[Dalaina Renee]

Very good! You have a gift with words!

[Kitty Forzaken]

This made me smile :)

[Hope]

it was fascinating and very emotional

[CourtNny]

It seems as if you are sort of going through the same thing I am.
I really liked this one because even though things are bad, you can always find the positives about everything and focus on them to get you through. Very motivational.

[Last Lying Look]

good poem. i like the emotion and intent.