Happiness

Happiness

A Poem by lauren emily
"

Just things I thought of..

"

Smile
You don't have a care..

Smile

Because you know someone

will always be there..

 

Laugh

Until your sides begin to ache..

Laugh

Because it's not a mistake..

 

Be Grateful

For things you now own..

Be Grateful

Because you will never

be alone..

 

Be Happy

For time passes by so fast..

Be Happy

Live in the moment

and not in the past..

 

 

© 2008 lauren emily


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your right on a lot of people live in the past they need to look forward to whats now and the what the future has in store for them,some have so much neg. in there lives but if they thought positive so much more would come there way. I'm always grateful to wake up and of all the beautiful stuff. I've always been the type material things mean nothing to me as long as i have the love from my friends and family. your poem is perfect i enjoy very much reading them thank you karen

Posted 16 Years Ago


great advice. everyone can learn a little something after reading this. keep it up.
~Karissa

Posted 16 Years Ago


I absolutely love this. Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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its good

Posted 16 Years Ago


Nice!


Posted 16 Years Ago


Cute, short, and to the point.
I like it very much!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I liked this poem. It was short an simple and yet conveys a message most people do not take to heart.
I feel we need to be reminded of what we have and what life should be about sometimes. Thanks for the piece. It was essential. I want to see more out of you.

-Paco

Posted 16 Years Ago


Pretty good things to think of! I liked how you formatted this and the flow was well done. You made some very valid points "Smile, Laugh, Be Greatful, Be Happy" man, sometimes we take those things so much for granted. Thank you for a well needed reminder. Good job. ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16. I love writing, good food, fast cars, interesting people, cemeteries, photograp.. more..

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