Freedom or Fraud

I know this is really short, but I couldn't think of anything else to say. haha

Do we really have freedom,

or is it just a show?

Do we really have the right?

Please tell me, I'm dying to know.

Do we really have opportunity?

Do we really have a voice?

Or is the carpet pulled out from beneath us,

leaving no choice?

Reviews

[dodger blue]

it was short & simple. i like the rhyme placed into it. good work on structure.

you sound like you would want more to say & with questions of freedom i'm sure with a little bit of reading you could write pages about how freedom may just be an illusion...a facade. that is only if the interest is there.

keep writing. -db

[ape domenigoni]

very powerful...I think the same things often. Good work!

[KAREN BROWN]

1st I enjoyed your poem its a very good question,well I believe we have the right and choice when it comes to our life in general of what we choose to do. I would hope we'd have the choice on other things as well. great job. keep on writing and thank you for sharing this with me. when you can can you also read mine it would mean a lot to me karen

[Windy]

Well for short it sure said alot and I liked it. You made some very good/valid points or questions here. To bad I don't know the answers either. and even though short you had good flow and rhyme and you put out to the reader some really good things to think about. good job, ;)

[Ernestine]

I like it. I think it's a very good poem.
Short and to the point.

[An Ordinary Woman]

It may be short but that is okay, it is very on target. I think it is profound even though you kept it lite.

Nice work!

[Aileen]

i like it. and i agree. keap up th great work
luv ya
Aileen

[ganymeder]

Succinct and to the point. I like it, especially the rhythm. :)