Seasons
A Poem by
lauren emily
Spring:
New life
Filled with green
Summer:
Out of school
The party queen
Autumn:
Orange, yellow, red
Leaves falling from the trees
Winter:
Drinking hot chocolate
Snow up to our knees
© 2008 lauren emily
Reviews
I have to say of all the poems on here that I have read, I hate this the most. :P
Okay, not really - I so dearly miss the change of seasons back in Maryland compared to the Hot 'n Dry and Hot 'n Wet of Florida. It left me painfully homesick in how elegantly it drew out the feelings with such few words...
Posted 16 Years Ago
i like it
Posted 16 Years Ago
i like it
This was sweet and simple. The seasons are that way as well sometimes.
Nice write!
Thank you for sharing.
Posted 16 Years Ago
This was sweet and simple. The seasons are that way as well sometimes.
Nice write!
Thank you for sharing.
Short, cute, fun good imagery and flow, I liked it, another job well done. keep going girl :)
Posted 16 Years Ago
Short, cute, fun good imagery and flow, I liked it, another job well done. keep going girl :)
Very nice, a refreshing read. I enjoy your writing, very honest, fun and direct. Just perfect!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very nice, a refreshing read. I enjoy your writing, very honest, fun and direct. Just perfect!
What a great poem! You really have a knack for creating feelings and imagery succinctly.
Posted 16 Years Ago
What a great poem! You really have a knack for creating feelings and imagery succinctly.
Now,
THIS is awesome :)
Truly.
In a nutshell...! lol
Love it
Posted 16 Years Ago
Now,
THIS is awesome :)
Truly.
In a nutshell...! lol
Love it
oh wow i love this and the picture that goes with it too. it makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside ^-^
Posted 16 Years Ago
oh wow i love this and the picture that goes with it too. it makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside ^-^
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 2, 2008
Last Updated on July 3, 2008
Author
lauren emily Long Beach, CA
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Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16.
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