Seasons

Seasons

A Poem by lauren emily

Spring:

New life

Filled with green

 

Summer:

Out of school

The party queen

 

Autumn:

Orange, yellow, red

Leaves falling from the trees

 

Winter:

Drinking hot chocolate

Snow up to our knees

 


© 2008 lauren emily


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I have to say of all the poems on here that I have read, I hate this the most. :P

Okay, not really - I so dearly miss the change of seasons back in Maryland compared to the Hot 'n Dry and Hot 'n Wet of Florida. It left me painfully homesick in how elegantly it drew out the feelings with such few words...

Posted 16 Years Ago


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i like it

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was sweet and simple. The seasons are that way as well sometimes.

Nice write!

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Short, cute, fun good imagery and flow, I liked it, another job well done. keep going girl :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very nice, a refreshing read. I enjoy your writing, very honest, fun and direct. Just perfect!

Posted 16 Years Ago


What a great poem! You really have a knack for creating feelings and imagery succinctly.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Now,
THIS is awesome :)
Truly.
In a nutshell...! lol


Love it


Posted 16 Years Ago


oh wow i love this and the picture that goes with it too. it makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside ^-^

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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lauren emily
lauren emily

Long Beach, CA



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Why 'ello there! Thanks for stoppin' by. My name is Lauren (previously my screen name was TwilightReader) and I'm 16. I love writing, good food, fast cars, interesting people, cemeteries, photograp.. more..

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