Difficulties

For every problem

For every cure

There seems to be more

Chaos that we must endure.

For every healed heart

For every new beat

There seems to be one

That is incomplete.

For every new life

For every wonderful plan

There seems to be a death

Or sadness that ruins what began.

For all new excitement

For all new delight

There seems to be some pain

ruining its joyous flight.

For every problem

For every cure

There seems to be more chaos

For humanity to endure.

Author's Note

There's always something that wants to ruin the fun..:(

Reviews

[Windy]

Well done my friend. I really liked this, you had good flow and rhyme and it was Very meaningful. I dont' usually try to "critique" mainly due to I am awful with puncuation etc but I think you are missing a "Y" on the second line, is it supposed to say "every"? cure? Anyway, you are doing great things here and showing so much talent. I enjoy reading what you post so keep them comming.

[Aileen]

so true...so true. i like. good job. keap up th great work
luv ya
Aileen

[Dani California]

For negative there is a positive
For every postive there is a negative

balance.

Though, unless your on
the positive end of balance,
you are right ... there is much
to endure.

Very insightful and well structured
poem! Your flow and rhyme are
awesome.. :)

Great job!

[Ms Jessica Renee]

Well written and boy is that true. Loved the structure of your words.