Am I?

Am I invisible?

As clear as glass..

Am I illuminated?

I can not just be passed..

Am I beautiful?

I make a scene..

Am I ugly?
So obsense..

Am I mellow?

Calm and silent..

Am I crazy?

Wild and sometimes violent..

Am I you?

Such a tease..

Am I me?

Just tell me please.

Author's Note

I think I got a little carried away with this one..like so many others..lol

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

The alternating questioning and rhyme offers a bit of madness to this moment of introspection. I do not see the raw emotion mentioned below, rather I see as I said - that little bit of madness one can find while inspecting their navel lint (some call it genuflection or introspection)... :)

[Ms Jessica Renee]

You can never get carried away with a poem with such raw emotion. Well done hun.

[Windy]

Oh I don't think you got carried away at all, I think you did a great job. Sometimes I like to read stories but when I want to read poems it's nice to find some that are "short and sweet" so to speak. Good job with the imagery and as I've said before you have the flow and the rhyme down pat. Congrats. ;)