At One With The Holy Spirit

This Christian poem aims to clarify the benefits of sincere Christian faith, in terms of how an individual is strengthened and empowered to live a fuller life.

When at one with the Holy Spirit,

commit your whole life to it,

no longer any need to fear,

worldly problems which once seemed so near,

 

Where there was darkness,

is now light,

even in the night,

your soul shines bright,

 

The burden of life is now less,

now that your soul has been blessed,

you are a vessel for the body of Christ,

with a new purpose in life,

 

No longer an obsession with the material,

now such trinkets seem menial,

praise the Lord night and day,

He will always be with you,

come what may.

Reviews

[GlendaK]

Julian, I was so upset at our misunderstanding.
My fear that you don't understand the burden I feel with the carnal spirit between us.
But you are Holy Spirit filled!
I am ashamed and guilty for everything.
Please don't let anything lead you astray! Eternity is worth holding back those urges. Julian, o.m.g.

[GlendaK]

Twilight, I'm leaving the site. I'll delete emails unread.
I love you as a brother in Christ more than what we contemplated.
Ciao, love.

[Twilight]

I wrote this one and Storm from Heaven, some years ago; during a different phase in my life. I'm now someone good still, but have the other side to me; as well. I have explained in a much longer WC message to you, on this site (as a direct message). It would probably be good to just leave your account open, and return when you feel less overwhelmed or confused. Then, others will be able to review and read; the writing left behind. You have nothing to be sorry about, honestly. And, may feel both calmer and clearer in your thoughts; if and when you return here. Your Julian (Twilight). Respectfully.

[GlendaK]

And, a.gain, you are correct, sir (;
I woke feeling much better and so inspired. Thank you, Julian. Write me as much as you want. Your words flow like poetry. I find them much like finding bread crumbs that lead to brilliance.

[Little Whisper]

Praise the Lord for your inspiring poem.

[Alzariah]

nice piece, simple but full of sense...)

[Just Cat]

I'm not a religious type at all, but this poem has a nice feel to it and I can appreciate it for what it is.
Good work.

[Marie Harrison]

This is lovely! Very inspirational to me. I love it!

[Erotic Goddess]

This was beautiful. A wonderful poem and a quiet declaration of faith. Wonderful.

xxoxx

[Ladysue]

I like the hope that comes from this piece...these lines stood out to me...

The burden of life is now less,
now that your soul has been blessed

nicely done...