The Freedom Party

Listen to me,

of the freedom party,

at which,

the guests are parting,

with something precious,

and to cherish,

to each of them,

shall never perish,

 

And furthermore,

without a doubt,

none shall leave without,

 

And yet you are,

about to learn,

what they receiveth in return,

 

Swap your labour,

for wealth and friends

 

Bitter jealously,

never makes amends,

 

They will do unto you,

as you do to them,

 

Exchange your love,

for womankind,

freedom for marriage,

and yet we find,

that the purest love is blind,

Can I take your hand in mine?

Author's Note

The Freedom Association

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Reviews

[lizap]

beautiful!I really like it and I also liked the last lines. and i love the imagination in freedom party. it reminds me of those great big parties on the beach where everyone feels free, but not really though cause your hmm idea is different. I also have a poem titled "freedom" you can check it out if you want.
so yeah very nice and keep writing more and more and more...
Liza:)

[Voice11]

wow. very unique, maybe can do better with the flow but overall good.

[CLUTZ]

yep yep....I like it, I think it's pretty. "that the purest love is blind, can I take your hand in mine?" are my two favorite lines. nice