Close To Knowing

I almost know her,

At least online,

she's never absent,

from my mind,

 

But never letting,

my true affection,

get the better of me,

upon reflection,

 

A fine woman,

of strong will,

not too tall,

with looks that kill,

 

There are times,

when in my mind,

does she know,

that true love binds?

 

To dominate,

or be controlled,

she likes both,

if the truth be told,

 

Both the lust,

and thrust of passion,

sometimes so wild,

it's like aggression,

 

She likes to hear,

the moans and sighs,

when making love,

is so divine,

 

Maturity and sophistication,

some uncertainty,

of the course to be taken,

my passion waits,

to be awakened!

 

 

 

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

What I find most striking and most appealing about this piece is the dance that you dance within your own self. In one instance, you are professing your feelings, while, in the other, you are reflecting, pondering her, uncertain as to her feelings for you. It's a tangible twist and turn through the feelings of the heart. Whether lust or love, who can say? There is such a finely woven thread between the two that they seem almost inseperable. Great job!

[Susan]

very striking and powerful piece...makes one wonder who the mystery person is...I love the lines - Both the lust and the thurst of passion..
very passionate...a great work of writing...

[Babbette Francis]

Another beauty.

[J.Black]

"Close to knowing," perhaps already known? Seems like the author talks about this female as if he's already dug himself deep into her, and has gotten to know what she is like. "My passion waits, to be awakened!" As for those lines, it was a very interesting way to end it off, however, passion or is it more-so lust? Overall, a genuine write, Julian. I can really determine that this woman is a strong, mature type of gal, knowing what she wants, wishing that you can be apart of it.

[MagiCrystal]

Both the lust,

and thrust of passion,

sometimes so wild,

it's like aggression,

These lines gives me an imagination that you enjoy this feelings and lust..!
It's like dating for the first time a person who is totally unknown to the person who is writing..!
You have made in this piece..magic and mystery and that my friend is ..Magical .. love it!