Well, thank you, I feel flattered and as I'm reading the previous comments.. I guess others do too. I'm a sucker for rhymes, especially for simple and minimalistic wording, yet on point in its own way.
Wow. This is AMAZING!!!!!!
"A woman's virtue,
is a beauteous treasure,
and her desire for love,
is beyond measure."
That was the perfect ending.
Great write!
-Elissa :)
The way you view women is beyond any words to describe it. WOW!!
How should a woman go about reviewing such a piece... It's beautiful!
No woman is perfect but you summed up 97.9999999% of women with this stanza
A woman's virtue,
is a beauteous treasure,
and her desire for love,
is beyond measure.
I really had no idea men noticed just how deep a womans love is... but you said it...you saw it!! and that my friend, is the real beauty in this piece! I'm keeping this! Thank you
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