A Picture of Love
A Poem by
Twilight
Loosely linked stylistically, with my "A Picture Of Beauty"; and "The Portrait" poems (on this site).
I remember the bliss,
Of your first kiss,
That warm tongue,
And tender lips
That refined shape,
And of late,
Your face reminds me,
Of a portrait
Which I held,
In my hands,
When you travelled,
To distant lands
Away from me,
But your thoughts were near,
And my intentions were crystal clear
A rose for you,
I longed to spare,
To rest gently,
In your black hair
I think you know,
What could follow,
Timeless love,
Or endless sorrow.
© 2024 Twilight
Author's Note
I look forward to your comments, and reviews. And, I welcome "read requests" on this site.
Featured Review
I think this is very beautiful. it's melodic as some of the other reviewers stated. It flows so sweetly and then you end it by saying that it could end with
"timeless love
or endless sorrow"
causing it to be almost bittersweet because the reader realizes that it could end in sorrow...excellent write as always!
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thanks, ms. Surreal..!
Reviews
Aww, this is sweet. No one really knows when it will end but the journey is beautiful.
Posted 3 Months Ago
Aww, this is sweet. No one really knows when it will end but the journey is beautiful.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
Yes indeed, Fia.
Very good poem, smooth flow and sensual images.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very good poem, smooth flow and sensual images.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thankyou kindly, EmpressPoetess.
Beautiful and heartfelt, with a kind of ambiguous ending. Just like love. Just like life.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Beautiful and heartfelt, with a kind of ambiguous ending. Just like love. Just like life.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
It sure is, Greg..!
I think this is very beautiful. it's melodic as some of the other reviewers stated. It flows so sweetly and then you end it by saying that it could end with
"timeless love
or endless sorrow"
causing it to be almost bittersweet because the reader realizes that it could end in sorrow...excellent write as always!
Posted 15 Years Ago
I think this is very beautiful. it's melodic as some of the other reviewers stated. It flows so sweetly and then you end it by saying that it could end with
"timeless love
or endless sorrow"
causing it to be almost bittersweet because the reader realizes that it could end in sorrow...excellent write as always!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thanks, ms. Surreal..!
I felt a sweet melody in the poem. The emotion was no overdone, but simply stated, but stated beautifully. I loved the ending two stanza's the most. I enjoyed reading this!
Posted 15 Years Ago
I felt a sweet melody in the poem. The emotion was no overdone, but simply stated, but stated beautifully. I loved the ending two stanza's the most. I enjoyed reading this!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Good to know! Thanks.
This ended so perfectly. It's all in her hands to end it beautifully or tragically, and you're trusting her enough to let her decide. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing :)
Posted 15 Years Ago
This ended so perfectly. It's all in her hands to end it beautifully or tragically, and you're trusting her enough to let her decide. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thanks for the praise.
No worries, first of all.
I liked this, especially the last stanza.
A beautiful poem!
~Lauren
Posted 15 Years Ago
No worries, first of all.
I liked this, especially the last stanza.
A beautiful poem!
~Lauren
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Yes, indeed. Thanks.
So sweet.
Like the crying of a heart on a sunset morning to its sleeping lover. Sends shivers down my spine of pure passion. So simply wrote but so filled with pure and clean energy that you can almost feel hiddden compllications . I loved it
Posted 15 Years Ago
So sweet.
Like the crying of a heart on a sunset morning to its sleeping lover. Sends shivers down my spine of pure passion. So simply wrote but so filled with pure and clean energy that you can almost feel hiddden compllications . I loved it
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thanks, for the thoughtful and positive comments.
very romantic,
filled with melody, -----I am in love with this stanzas, "Away from me,
But your thoughts were near,
And my intentions were crystal clear
A rose for you,
I longed to spare,
To rest gently,
In your black hair
I think you know,
What could follow,
Timeless love," beautifully written,
----mishy
Posted 15 Years Ago
very romantic,
filled with melody, -----I am in love with this stanzas, "Away from me,
But your thoughts were near,
And my intentions were crystal clear
A rose for you,
I longed to spare,
To rest gently,
In your black hair
I think you know,
What could follow,
Timeless love," beautifully written,
----mishy
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thanks. But, Mishi. Where art thou? Twilight has returned.!
aww....this was written with such an imagination, I loved your thoughts on relationship thanks for entering my contest. regards, L.G.
Posted 15 Years Ago
aww....this was written with such an imagination, I loved your thoughts on relationship thanks for entering my contest. regards, L.G.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thankyou. Keep writing.!
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