A Picture of Love

A Picture of Love

A Poem by Twilight
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Loosely linked stylistically, with my "A Picture Of Beauty"; and "The Portrait" poems (on this site).

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I remember the bliss,

Of your first kiss,

That warm tongue,

And tender lips

 

That refined shape,

And of late,

Your face reminds me,

Of a portrait

 

Which I held,

In my hands,

When you travelled,

To distant lands

 

Away from me,

But your thoughts were near,

And my intentions were crystal clear

 

A rose for you,

I longed to spare,

To rest gently,

In your black hair

 

I think you know,

What could follow,

Timeless love,

Or endless sorrow.

 

© 2024 Twilight


Author's Note

Twilight
I look forward to your comments, and reviews. And, I welcome "read requests" on this site.

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I think this is very beautiful. it's melodic as some of the other reviewers stated. It flows so sweetly and then you end it by saying that it could end with
"timeless love
or endless sorrow"
causing it to be almost bittersweet because the reader realizes that it could end in sorrow...excellent write as always!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks, ms. Surreal..!



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Aww, this is sweet. No one really knows when it will end but the journey is beautiful.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

1 Month Ago

Yes indeed, Fia.
Very good poem, smooth flow and sensual images.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Thankyou kindly, EmpressPoetess.
Beautiful and heartfelt, with a kind of ambiguous ending. Just like love. Just like life.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

It sure is, Greg..!
I think this is very beautiful. it's melodic as some of the other reviewers stated. It flows so sweetly and then you end it by saying that it could end with
"timeless love
or endless sorrow"
causing it to be almost bittersweet because the reader realizes that it could end in sorrow...excellent write as always!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks, ms. Surreal..!
I felt a sweet melody in the poem. The emotion was no overdone, but simply stated, but stated beautifully. I loved the ending two stanza's the most. I enjoyed reading this!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Good to know! Thanks.
This ended so perfectly. It's all in her hands to end it beautifully or tragically, and you're trusting her enough to let her decide. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the praise.
No worries, first of all.

I liked this, especially the last stanza.

A beautiful poem!
~Lauren


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Yes, indeed. Thanks.
So sweet.
Like the crying of a heart on a sunset morning to its sleeping lover. Sends shivers down my spine of pure passion. So simply wrote but so filled with pure and clean energy that you can almost feel hiddden compllications . I loved it

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks, for the thoughtful and positive comments.
very romantic,
filled with melody, -----I am in love with this stanzas, "Away from me,

But your thoughts were near,

And my intentions were crystal clear



A rose for you,

I longed to spare,

To rest gently,

In your black hair



I think you know,

What could follow,

Timeless love," beautifully written,

----mishy



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks. But, Mishi. Where art thou? Twilight has returned.!
aww....this was written with such an imagination, I loved your thoughts on relationship thanks for entering my contest. regards, L.G.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Twilight

3 Weeks Ago

Thankyou. Keep writing.!

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Added on November 5, 2008
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