Crystal Rain

Fall onto my skin,

Oh crystal rain,

You glisten so bright,

Without refrain

 

When it falls,

I bless your name,

For only you,

Crystal rain

 

In the clouds,

Way up above,

I think of you,

And of love

 

In the blowing wind,

I hear your name,

And my heart pounds,

At that mystic sound.

Reviews

[[untitled]]

Yes, I too share the sentiments of the other ladies. This is a beautiful ode to my wonderful friend, MagicCrystal :) For a short write it has a powerful impact on the heart.

"Fall onto my skin,
Oh crystal rain,
You glisten so bright,
Without refrain

When it falls,
I bless your name,
For only you,
Crystal rain..." ~ This is woven together so eloquently. It has a fresh quality to it. Nice job.

[A Risen Heroine.]

I love the flow and how you write.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the awesome work!
~A Fallen Heroine~

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a vivid write, bringing alive the feeling and sensation of the rain. Beautifully written and flowing!

[Ama May Cooper]

Absoulutly beatiufl. Makes it sound like the rain is giving a sort of hidden beauty to the whole world. Something so simple has never ever been so attractive to me you have done this wonderfully.
Reminds me of standing in the rain on a boiling hot day and basking happily its in cooling splatter

[The DuchessPoet]

I love this Julian...
I really do!

Thank you so much for honoring my contest with your talent!

[Amaunet]

simply, and breathtakingly, beautiful!

[Ladysue]

This was beautifully and divinely written. It really has the feel of purity and blissfulness to it. Absolutely gorgeous prose!!!

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a beautiful poem Julian. It captures tranquily, and sensuality
of the rain. I absolutely love this line:

When it falls,

I bless your name

Reminds me of a chant of a love that will never end.
Wondeful read...AD

[MagiCrystal]

ok this is my poem.. thanks I will posted on my blog and my personal.. files.. thanks.. I love my poem you are such a nice guy.. Magic