On purpose, I kept an old-fashioned kind of feel for this poem. It is about a man's yearning for his lover, after she has departed from this realm. Perhaps it is also a homage to love.
But How Could Anyone Take The Place,
Of Such Great Beauty,
And Endless Grace?
I Still Remember,
Her Beauteous Face,
That Tender Body,
And Warm Embrace
Eternal But Blind,
I Always Find,
No Greater Gift,
Than Love Divine.
Beautiful tribute to love mixed with a twinge of sadness. Love that last verse...poetically genius.
The gift of divine love as you express it in this magnificent painting, which captures your attention so dramatically....your words alive and passionate... however i glean some sadness as the painting disappears and you are in wonder, and a new one appears, yet it seems difficult for you to accept..
lovely write!
Warmly, B
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Thanks, Betty. I was partly inspired by "The Picture Of Dorian Grey", and Poe's sombre but beautiful.. read moreThanks, Betty. I was partly inspired by "The Picture Of Dorian Grey", and Poe's sombre but beautiful writings; for this one. I don't have any paintings myself, nor was I sad at the time of writing; Betty. It's just the emotional style of writing, which I chose to adopt; for the actual poetic content which I had in mind.
I liked how this elegy is built around Courtly Love motifs, touching, made me think of a Waterhouse painting !
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5 Months Ago
No. I have never even heard any, of Courtney Love's music. I created this entirely. From the foundat.. read moreNo. I have never even heard any, of Courtney Love's music. I created this entirely. From the foundation, to the roof.!
Are you Sir Lancelot perhaps? Very King Arthur-ish. I love fairy/folk tales and legends, which this had the feel of for me. You were successful it making it sound of yesteryear.
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Thanks for the praise, Invisible Ink; but I'm no Sir Lancelot lol.
I really love the imagery in this poem. You made an excellent choice in giving your poem a more vintage sounding voice. Your last verse is quite beautiful to me, and I think that it makes an outstanding end to an outstanding poem.
Write on.
-Solitude
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It was also written in solitude, Solitude; a time when I find it easier to think and write clearly.
Beautiful and haunting. I really liked this. I can feel the loss and the longing. Flows really well. Very descriptive.
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Thankyou. Love lost, and that haunting similarity with losing someone through death; was one of my i.. read moreThankyou. Love lost, and that haunting similarity with losing someone through death; was one of my inspirations for writing this. And, it's a theme which recurred in some of Edgar Allan Poe's better known stories and poems. He has certainly influenced me, stylistically.
Exactly so, Clint. Thanks. I am certainly familiar with Lenore, and the integral sadness of lost lov.. read moreExactly so, Clint. Thanks. I am certainly familiar with Lenore, and the integral sadness of lost love which it conveys.
oh wow, you have a beautiful way with words. the rythm was seamless and very easy to read. and i usually dont like rhyming poems, but this was absolutely perfect.
'Eternal But Blind,
I Always Find,
No Greater Gift,
Than Love Divine.'
that part i foudn to be the most well-written. it was a perfect closing and just fit with the poem :)
anyway, great work julian!
My first name is Julian. I'm a white male, straight, English and 51 years old. My email address is [email protected]. Writing is just an interest to me. My favourite writers include H. P.. more..