In this poem, I hope to have captured the purity and redeeming qualities which we tend to associate with rain and the ocean waves. Perhaps also, I have suggested that rain can be a means of escape.
Beautiful!!! I couldnt agree more with your train of thought concerning the cleansing quality of water. It is a resource we completely take for granted, I know there are those who despise rain, but I'm not one of them.
Your prose is tight with clearly defined content.
Loved it...and welcome to the cafe' :-)
Helen.
O my God!
it was one of the best poems I ever read!
I liked it quite a lot, how you rhyme and get to go back to, oh rain please come and cleanse my soul,
your poetry inspired me!
thanks!
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Thanks, Carolin. For your praise, and encouragement.!
Interesting. You made the rain seem like a Greek god of some sort. Also, I find some degree of innocence in this writing. I imagine this poem taken from the mind of a little child. You captured the way children seem to look at ordinary things with such faith and hope. Good Job.
Keep Writing. ^___^
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This is gorgeous. You paint a vivid picture with your words. I loved it :)
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preeeeetttty! :) This is another short and sweet one! I love the rain. My code name is raindropoflife. You really played up the use of rain and all its meanings... love it!
there is something about water, that cleanses our souls and bodies. i think we all seek to be cleansed in some form or another. Water is one of our most valuable resources on this planet that so many take for granted. When you live in the desert and dont know when the next rain will come, you learn to value it.
A beautifully written poem.
Very nice! And, quite lovely to read on a chilly, rainy, Florida evening.
I see the rain as a complete and total cleansing of the narrator's mind and soul. A comfort. A solace.
Raindrops can often soothe the spirit . . . and wash away all the worries of the day and the days to come.
Beautiful!
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A rather insightful and positive review again, from "untitled". Oh my, working out his/her/hybrid's .. read moreA rather insightful and positive review again, from "untitled". Oh my, working out his/her/hybrid's "pronouns" - would probably be fun lol.
I really like this. It seems that the person saying the poem is trying to wash away his sins, make them go away, or to better so that he doesn't go to fell.
It seems that he's desperate for it and he's truly sorry for what he did.
It's a really good poem!
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