What Did I Say Wrong?

What Did I Say Wrong?

A Poem by Twilight

What did I say wrong,
Nothing whatsoever,
You made claims of wanting to know me,
Without making the effort,

Instead of really trying,
You only say that you will,
For someone like me who loves you,
That's a really bitter pill,

A pill that I won't swallow,
Because I still want to take the chance,
That you will eventually play for real,
Instead of just your merry dance,

So hold proper conversations,
By choosing what to discuss,
When asking be specific,
Instead of making a fuss,

Or, there will be -

No more trust for us...

© 2025 Twilight


Author's Note

Twilight
Have you ever found yourself, in a situation; relating to this? And, found yourself unable to act reasonably; in the eyes of someone who somehow attracts you..?

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Added on February 5, 2025
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Twilight
Twilight

Belper, Derbyshire, United Kingdom



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My first name is Julian. I'm a white male, straight, English and 51 years old. My email address is [email protected]. Writing is just an interest to me. My favourite writers include H. P.. more..

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