Cosmic View

Cosmic chaos concealing so much,
Infinity of darkness expanding,
Whilst our mortal lives are grinding,

Moments of starlight,
Twinkle through the clouds,
Just try to ignore,
The throngs of noisy crowds,

Mysterious cosmic forces,
Within a universal dream,
So much is not what it seems,

With luck you may experience,
Shooting stars or moments of love,
But too much idle star gazing,
Distracts from active striving,

We're cosmic dust in the greater scheme,
But we are where we are,
And love is the greatest dream,

When two minds & bodies become one

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Author's Note

Can you relate to this, in one or more different ways?

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

We are indeed cosmic dust and yet the mind of our dusty debris is capable of containing the whole cosmos. We are beings of contrast. Physically minute but capable of almost infinite mental expansion. The trick as this fine write emphasized is maintaining the balance between both:)

[Twilight]

Balance is important, in so many different aspects of life.

[lov]

wow, more people have to see this! this is what I call great poetry!

your words are calming and soft yet so abstract and relating, leading to a point of understanding what you are trying to say, not trying, preaching to us!

Is love really just luck? Like seeing a shooting star?
Or are we just looking in the wrong places? Like looking to the ground, missing a hundred shooting stars, when all we have to do is to look up?

[Twilight]

That's a positive and encouraging, review. Thanks. You seem to understand my writing, so far I have also added some short stories, on here. Best wishes.