Notice how the focus gradually changes, with later verses focusing upon the concept - of a shadow as representing a malign presence (in physical form).
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I love that there was no ring of hope to grasp like in the first writing of yours I read. Sometimes we have to just end up in the maw. The shadow on the floor. That feeling can be totally cleansing.
Very Stephen King-esque. I love his stories with vile endings.
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2 Days Ago
Thanks, and good to know. Speak later this evening, and pleased that we're in touch.
I love that there was no ring of hope to grasp like in the first writing of yours I read. Sometimes we have to just end up in the maw. The shadow on the floor. That feeling can be totally cleansing.
Very Stephen King-esque. I love his stories with vile endings.
Posted 2 Days Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Days Ago
Thanks, and good to know. Speak later this evening, and pleased that we're in touch.
My first name is Julian. I'm a white male, straight, English and 51 years old. My email address is [email protected]. Writing is just an interest to me. My favourite writers include H. P.. more..