Twilight

Today's morning mist brought lovely memories back to me.

The twilight morning mist brushes my face

Reminding me of a lover's soft embrace.

 

The Mourning Dove's 'coo'

Is reminiscent of a lover's "I love you."

 

The sun softly rises over the horizon,

With it's brillance of colors and hues

Reminding me of a lover's vigilance and tenderness too.

 

And as the morning continues to begin another day,

I remember a lover's slumber - angelic and full of grace.

 

TD 5.9.2007

Reviews

[Michael X]

Dreamy, even before i read the ending i could sense a beautiful
ambience of a graceful kind, soothing descriptive feelings,
there is a warmth that flows through the eloquent wording,
a soft brilliance, love the imagery, this is enchanting, truly Romantic, mike

[Anthony Morningstar]

Nice little couplets there. And the change in the middle doesn't hurt the poem at all.