Rebekah's Epitaph

She traveled many paths,

And loved, cared, and hurt for many souls.

But the greatest love and the most narrow path,

She reserved for God.

 

TD 8.15.2007

Reviews

[Whisperer]

This is very beautiful! It is quite a miracle how you describe yourself in only these four lines. Your choice of words reveal more than the central idea alone.
"narrow path" - This says so much. ...Of not only what God and love mean to you, but what life means to you as well.
I loved this piece.

[Vicki Phipps]

Very simply but elaquently put! I love it.

[Helen Woodward]

WOW!!!!! This is wonderful...A truly beautiful 'last words' Epitaph, it couldn't be more appropriate if you tried...Good luck for the contest TD....

[Lisa Verdon]

This is beautiful, TD. It's simple and humble--which is rare. I wish I shared your conviction. There was a time...

[Amor-de-angel]

I'd be proud of an epitaph like that.Nice one TD

[S. P. Vaporis]

i applaud the commitment! Well said!

[Anthony Morningstar]

That reminds a lot of what people talk about around here. That most people are trying to walk a path and they hope that they don't fall of it. And it's a really hard path to walk.

[Natalie C]

Oh, wow TD, this was brilliant. Bravo on the wonderful message that you brought across here. Amazing journey, reserved for only two people. You and God!

Great write, I loved it immensely!