Word and the Five Senses

Word = Thought = Stimulation

Sight, Sound, Taste, Smell, Touch

 

Blue skies.

 

Clap of thunder.

 

Peaches sweet and juicy.

 

Skin glistening with sweat.

 

Lips soft, sensual, and full

 

Beneath the blue skies we lay;

In the distance is the clap of thunder.

We continue to feed each other the peaches, sweet and juicy.

Our skin glistens with sweat from the mounting passion,

Your lips – soft, sensual, and full – touch my lips.

We unite in a fusion of sight, sound, taste, smell, and touch.

And new words, thoughts, and stimulation are born,

Bringing forth a kaleidoscope of colors.

 

TD  7.03.2007

 

Reviews

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a great piece. I love that it is seductive and sensual but not vulgar or disgusting. I also loved the way you used imagery as passion Exploding as sights and sounds. Great write.
Debby

[Rambling Prose]

I absolutely love this piece! The way you introduce each initial thought & its progression to completion lends an effectual influence to the whole. It's romantic, soft and sensual.

Nicely done...

[doreen cyr]

AWESOME WRITE AND DESERVING OF THE AWARD
DOREEN

[Eric]

Tasty! I'm not crazy about the color usage but the structure inspired me to read this three times. Well done.

[Yvonne Heidt]

"Word = Thought = Stimulation"

I had never thought of that!

Okay you accomplished this: Excellent descriptions that make me stimulated!

Makes me want to eat a peach on a romantic picnic! (and I don't even LIKE peaches!)

Great Job! :)

[Kira Love]

Mmmm this is just some FANTASTIC imagery. Even without the colored words at the beginning, the words take on a life and color of their own. This is a fantastic piece, Rebekah! Thank you for sharing this with me!!

[Sam Freeland]

Warm words whether written or recited by others are the
avenue to passion, considered by all as vital. I can almost
hear your words being recited by your readers. They are
a blend of love, caring and consideration. I will find a time
to recite them myself.

[Page Rae Bickel]

this poem truely touches the senses with words, I can almost hear the thunder clapping

[Rie Sheridan Rose]

Interesting format. I love the use of senses in a piece, and you did an excellent job getting them all in. The lines at the beginning are an intriguing choice. Very unusual poem. Well written.

[April " if anyone ..]

I love this poem, I love the details that keep you wanting more

[Julian]

I like how the theme of the coloured lines thread their way through the body of the poem. Passionate and a feast for the senses! Julian