hating or Loving?

hating or Loving?

A Poem by Lisa Moore
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How i can't forget him /- <3

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It's harder than I thought.
It seems you can't be forgot.
You're here.
You're there.
You're everywhere.
Everywhere I look,
You're the only thing I see.
Leave me alone!
F**k off!
Let me be!
I am trying to forget,
You make that hard to do.
You are running through my veins,
Somewhat like the flu.
I hate you!
I hate you!
I wish this could be true
I hate you!
I hate you!
Just kidding, I love you.
Love you with all I have.
Love you so much.
It hurts real bad.
I hate you and love you
I wish I didn't 
I hate you?
No.
I don't.
But then again. . . I do.

© 2013 Lisa Moore


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A very real and familiar challenge many people these days face. I really liked the poem! The rhyming was great and the writing itself was quite good, the only thing I'd do differently is not using the term "Just kidding" only because it kind of takes away the aura of struggling.

But anyways, excellent job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shawn M

10 Years Ago

Replace it with "I lied. I love you." That would serve better here.



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Lisa's in love....
Cute and honest....good job describing the human condition.
Enjoyed your torment...LOL

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very real and familiar challenge many people these days face. I really liked the poem! The rhyming was great and the writing itself was quite good, the only thing I'd do differently is not using the term "Just kidding" only because it kind of takes away the aura of struggling.

But anyways, excellent job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shawn M

10 Years Ago

Replace it with "I lied. I love you." That would serve better here.

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Added on December 16, 2013
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