Happy for Once

about how i decided i was happy for once

Living, breathing

Life or death

Which to choose?

I hold my breath

I think i'll live

Live for now

I choose life

Take a bow

Because I'm still fighting

I always will

I thought I had lost

But I'm standing, still.

I'm winning?

I'm winning.

Stay positive, Smile

That's how you know you've won for a while

Author's Note

sorry if it sucks but it was an in the moment piece :)

Reviews

[Rose Diamond]

I really liked this! It's simple, yet each word is coated in optimism and hope that's almost contagious. It's hard to make that decision: to be happy or to dwell in darkness, to live or to end it all, and they way you portrayed this decision was very real and personal. Good job!

[Lisa Moore]

Thanks c: i appreciate it (:

[Rose Diamond]

No problem! :)

[zainul]

The piece looks like a lovely flower vase.
Its message is like fragrant flowers in the vase.
I feel happy that you have won.
It does not matter even if it is for a while.
Wonderful write,Lisa.