Inject

Inject

A Poem by Twenty Degrees
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Inject me to be well

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Inject me with the strangest idea’s

The sorrowful in depth ones

Ones of written pasts

Inject me with the clearest of idea’s

Crystal unlike the moon

Solid not like the trains

Train me to be well

© 2016 Twenty Degrees


Author's Note

Twenty Degrees
The thoughts of a mother at her daughters possible deathbed. Based off of a story I've been writing for some time.

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Hello Dear Poet, a fine piece you wrote. I read it again after reading your notes and it made all
The total sense. The poem it self could hold a lot of meaning, but with thw personal touches, this
Piece is quite inspirational. Very well done, so cool, Thanks EG

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love writing poems based off of current novels in progress, this is something I like to do as well to keep my thoughts for the book going. This makes sense for a mothers thoughts to be after the lose of a child. It's tragic. She wants to remember happier times when she was alive, but will not forget how it ended. Great write/writing exercise. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the thoughts and the hope in the poetry. Good to be injected with thoughts and some direction. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


Its hard to understand at times like this....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interestingly obscure and deep. It kind of reminds me of Mina Loy. Well done. A good piece of work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting development and thought processing. I can see that you use no punctuation and that is your choice as an artist.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Twenty Degrees

8 Years Ago

Yeah it's always been in my style, however many people have suggested I use it. Just most of the tim.. read more
softlyfall

8 Years Ago

That's completely up to you but the reason you might consider it is this could be misread. If you do.. read more
Hello Dear Poet, a fine piece you wrote. I read it again after reading your notes and it made all
The total sense. The poem it self could hold a lot of meaning, but with thw personal touches, this
Piece is quite inspirational. Very well done, so cool, Thanks EG

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Twenty Degrees
Twenty Degrees

Apple Valley, CA



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I'm an eighteen year old girl from California. I like writing a variety of things and one day hope that writing can be something I publish as a hobby. I write poetry and stories of almost all genre's... more..

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