Freezing

Freezing, my arms aren't raising.

I can't feel anymore.

That doesn't matter to most.

Will I fix it.

I don't think so.

But that's alright.

I'm fine I told myself.

I enjoy the feeling.

I'm freezing, but I like it.

Author's Note

Pain is only the half of it.

Reviews

[softlyfall]

It makes me think of a scene in a movie, the hero or heroine fallen in a blizzard, having set out against all odds, maybe having had that kind of epiphany that changes the course of our lives. Hope will not burn our, never die, until the fallen hero takes hos last breathe and even then, as the scene pans out to a sea of raging white, the purpose means more than the arrival at the destination.
So moody and atmospheric. I enjoyed this so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Freezing isn't a good feeling. You made me wish to know more. I liked the calmness and accepting the cold as alright. A interesting poem.
Coyote

[Scheherazade]

This was good. I quite liked it.

[theshygirl]

your words fasinate me, the inner battle with yourself is a though one and you wont accept defeat but when the victory arrives, what is there left to fight for..

i really love it ! and love the line " i am freezing but i like it''

very well written!

xxx shy

[Amber Lily]

Reminds me of home. This time of year where I live is notorious for freezing. The shortness of this poem relates to know one thinks in the cold. Nothing too complicated, when your body starts to freeze it slows down your brain, only creating basic thoughts. Well done :)

[E G TEN]

Hello Friend, somehow I prefer Winter than summer, I enjoy this write very much.
And yes pain is just the half of it, but it will go away. A cool poem, thanks EG

[JayceeC]

We become comfortable in the cold, with the numbness of it all. The pain only comes when you are trying to thaw it all out. Unfortunately, you have to go through it if you ever want to enjoy the heat.