Haiku Numero Uno
A Poem by
Travis Tweed
Just a haiku.
You are the moon's face.
Illuminating all things
lost in the darkness.
© 2009 Travis Tweed
Reviews
Enjoyable Haiku...got to love them. There just a snippet of creativity!
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is great! I really enjoy it.
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is great! I really enjoy it.
I like it...a very good poem.
Great Job
Posted 15 Years Ago
I like it...a very good poem.
Great Job
Wow I really like this. I can't write haikus, partly because i have a lot of thoughts, but your, well wow. So much said in three lines. Great job.
i look forward to reading some other things.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Wow I really like this. I can't write haikus, partly because i have a lot of thoughts, but your, well wow. So much said in three lines. Great job.
i look forward to reading some other things.
Thanks everyone for taking the time to read and review my lil haiku.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Thanks everyone for taking the time to read and review my lil haiku.
Short and sweet, beautiful image created in my thoughts from this well written Haiku. Keep em coming, sometimes a single image is all you need to create to inspire someone.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Short and sweet, beautiful image created in my thoughts from this well written Haiku. Keep em coming, sometimes a single image is all you need to create to inspire someone.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I absolutley love this.
This is such a great poem!
Adorable.
Fantastic! Couldn't have been written any better.
Xxstaysweet...or else,
Rina
Posted 15 Years Ago
I absolutley love this.
This is such a great poem!
Adorable.
Fantastic! Couldn't have been written any better.
Xxstaysweet...or else,
Rina
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is good ! I like it . I was never much good at Huikus myself but... GOOD JOB ! Keep it up !
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is good ! I like it . I was never much good at Huikus myself but... GOOD JOB ! Keep it up !
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 7, 2009
Last Updated on May 7, 2009
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