Haiku Numero Uno

Haiku Numero Uno

A Poem by Travis Tweed
"

Just a haiku.

"

You are the moon's face.

Illuminating all things

lost in the darkness.

© 2009 Travis Tweed


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Enjoyable Haiku...got to love them. There just a snippet of creativity!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is great! I really enjoy it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like it...a very good poem.
Great Job

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow I really like this. I can't write haikus, partly because i have a lot of thoughts, but your, well wow. So much said in three lines. Great job.
i look forward to reading some other things.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Thanks everyone for taking the time to read and review my lil haiku.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Short and sweet, beautiful image created in my thoughts from this well written Haiku. Keep em coming, sometimes a single image is all you need to create to inspire someone.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutley love this.
This is such a great poem!
Adorable.

Fantastic! Couldn't have been written any better.

Xxstaysweet...or else,
Rina

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good ! I like it . I was never much good at Huikus myself but... GOOD JOB ! Keep it up !

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Travis Tweed
Travis Tweed

Goodfellow AFB, TX



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