Love Within

As my daydream becomes a reality love evolves.

The dark passion,
Through my finger tips,
As I touch you ever so softly.
A peaceful shock of dream,
Comes to awaken the desires of reality,
Feel my love in heat,
As I pull you to come towards me.
The breeze of love so crisp,
For I'd die to smell that air again,
For it's only known between us.
Staring into your eyes,
Buries something more then a lustful pupil.
In the mind of ours,
As we lay down together,
Worlds only revolved around us.
The past shattered,
The present is now.
As I entice you and take you in,
I enjoy the star's light that compliments you.
As the moon shines the words,
"They love each other;
Tonight's there night"
I embrace you in for a kiss.
A kiss I'll forever love to miss.
When your lips touch mine,
I come to realize our love will never die.
A kiss so soft, warm, unforgettable
I only beg for more.
With the deepening of the kiss,
I fall impossibly more in love with you.
We exchange our love until the birds sing.
For we never make love,
For our love is already there.
So much desired love fulfilled only for the day,
But when night falls,
Everything starts all over again.
As I hold you so tight,
Never letting you go,
I close my eyes,
Knowing that this,
Is exactly where I'm suppose to be.

Reviews

[Loner]

Awsome !! keep writing for us plz.

[R.C.A.]

I love this poem. It is emotional and concrete. There is really strong imagery. One mistake though was in the line "Tonight's there night", it should be their instead of there.