I enjoyed this poem with its touch of rhyme and theme. Love transforms. I was inspired to write this gift mono-rhyme quatrain for you which you may keep as your own:
Monsters
Monsters come out from the cold
searching for love to enfold.
Though they stay strong, large, and bold,
they lose all their horns I’m told.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I like it. Thank you. =]
11 Years Ago
You’re welcome! I was thinking of a cold Halloween Night when I wrote this. Little children in mon.. read moreYou’re welcome! I was thinking of a cold Halloween Night when I wrote this. Little children in monster costumes searching for cookies, candy, and love.
I enjoyed this poem with its touch of rhyme and theme. Love transforms. I was inspired to write this gift mono-rhyme quatrain for you which you may keep as your own:
Monsters
Monsters come out from the cold
searching for love to enfold.
Though they stay strong, large, and bold,
they lose all their horns I’m told.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I like it. Thank you. =]
11 Years Ago
You’re welcome! I was thinking of a cold Halloween Night when I wrote this. Little children in mon.. read moreYou’re welcome! I was thinking of a cold Halloween Night when I wrote this. Little children in monster costumes searching for cookies, candy, and love.
I am your breath you are my ((left)) ? Dis spell check throw this in my mistake? I wanted to read
I am your breath you are my life?
Great poem. Glad I caught it. shallimarRose
No. I meant to put left. It's a thinker. On the left side of the body occupies the heart, yet the he.. read moreNo. I meant to put left. It's a thinker. On the left side of the body occupies the heart, yet the heart is small whereas breath is vital and essential; huge. Thus, you can't live without the left side and even if it were possible, it would be bloody difficult. Thank you for the comment.
11 Years Ago
Wow I guess.. I did not see that.. lol Great poem.. Ari.. xo Rose