Sample

This is a small bit of my writting

 The wind howled as the storm raged on. The sky was like a black hole as no stars could penatrate it's black blanket. All around leafs were tossed around in a windy whirrlpool. Animals and people took refuge in  house and in dens under swaying trees. They waited for the storm to pass. Lightining flashed across the ebony sky and everyone jumped and covered their ears. The thunder was appluse to the monsterus storm. Inside one house a little girl cried and prayed it would be over soon.

Author's Note

This is not part of a story I'm writtting.

Reviews

[Anthony]

I agree with Legacy here, and won't repeat the errors they detailed. It is a great piece, and deserves praise. By writing more, and becoming more confident in your skills, Is necessary to become a better writer.
I started off, as I'm sure most of us has, just like you, and now I receive a lot of praise for my style of writing, and my material. Though I write mostly poetry, I prefer reading stories, and books. And won't hesitate to help someone that asks for it.

Anthony

[Marina Blossom]

Thank you Anthony.

[Marina Blossom]

Thank you everyone for your reviews. I'm sorry about my grammer and spelling! I'm an ameture at literary correctness part of writting. Thank you so much!

[Legacy]

Marina Blossom,

A very nice start, a few little grammer fixes: Too much "black" line two.
Too many "around" line three.
Monsterous not Monsterus...

Other than that, you have mastered the art of description (in style of your own).

Look forward to reading more of your story.

Have a great day and welcome to Poetic Infusion Society and my Friends... :).

Legacy

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We have had powerful storms here. I like this and the feelings presented in this. Storms can be scary and so can the storms of life.