BAD LOVE

Being betrayed by love is one of the painful experience in life to avoid. "But sometimes we do not call for it rather it call us

The long firm hold hands
Slipping off I say
Love flies away
To a city I stay
But a different gate

My Eve was behind me
Yet I was blind
Love blocks sight.

Author's Note

Being betrayed by love I tell you is the worst pain...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting piece....
poetry often takes me places...Eve....a different gate, Adam betrayed, the garden of eden....now he is in a different place with the different gate.
he was blinded by love and ate the apple...trust broken there.
j.

[Mr 2five]

Thank you alot!
Your writings really inspire me as a young one...

[Mr 2five]

Bad love around us all
People pretend they love you to make you fall for them and breaks your heart after.
Nice work