Young Daffodil

An unfinished original lyric composition. I have the melody in my mind, but as I'm clueless with instruments, these shall remain as words. P.S: Daffodils represent hope ((:

Remember when you were young?

You thought where you went was the world

And everything seemed so near

Like nothing could ever tear them away from you

You got fresh apples,

Never had them brown

Wanted some piggybacks,

Daddy lifted you up

And all of this time, your favorite daffodil

Bloomed, ever so warmly.

Author's Note

I'm too lazy to finish it up for now 'cause life is hectic.. Tell me how you feel ^^

Reviews

[Lonely Islander]

I love how you represent daffodils as hope...this was a sweet beautiful poem....great job :):):D.

[T*Fuyumi]

Thank you! I did some little research on flowers and found out their meanings so I could make use of floral beings :DD I'm glad you liked it!

[Lonely Islander]

:-):-):-D.

[khalid]

very nicely penned. when we grow up, we forget we were young and dependable..

[T*Fuyumi]

Hey there! Thank you for the review~! ^^ And yeah, that's a good point brought up that summarizes the gist of my lyrics :D

-T*Fuyumi

[khalid]

you are welcome, its really nicely penned

[JC]

i think it is finished...very real with a lot in a few words.

[T*Fuyumi]

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback! :D
I'm glad this short piece was pleasing ^^