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A finger pointed upwards to a dark purple and navy blue sky filled with a surplus of silver stars. The sky’s reflection painted onto her eyes. Her irises seemed to glow gently with a speck of silver. The sound of her heartbeat running with the rush of adrenaline. Every stretch of her muscle fibers in her legs, retracting back and forth. The shimmering fish races alongside her, swimming to the ends of the Earth. The sky blends orangey red and blueish purple with each other, a symphony of color. The girl takes her first large breath of a new day while the fish fell asleep.

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[Chryiss]

Fishies! :) This is a lovely paragraph that creates a beautiful cool-colored image. Nice alliteration too! The story, the ending in particular intrigues me as I wonder why she's swimming, to whom or who is pointing the finger, and why the fish fell asleep while she seemed to have woken up. The movement and colors in this is really vivid and flows in an easy, dreamlike way.