I wanna Be...

One of my personal favs

I wanna be….

How do I say this, without sounding insane,
I have a lot to tell, so how should I explain?
Basically it boils down to what I wanna be,
I hope you don’t mind the selfish tone and it all about me.
Because I wanna be someone who you run to, when there’s nowhere to run,
I wanna be someone you come to, when you want the pain to be done.
When you ask how, I wanna be your solution,
When the world needs clearity, I wanna be your resolution.
I wanna be someone you trust in when you feel you need to vent,
I wanna be someone you believe when you feel need to repent.
When you feel like you just need some love,
I wanna be more then just your hug.
I wanna be there when no one is around and you’re left without a choice,
I wanna be here just to hear the sound of your voice.
When you accomplish something and you jump into the first arms you see,
You know that’s where I wanna be.
I wanna be your drug from any pain,
I wanna be your shelter from any rain.
If you need any help you know I wanna assist,
If you need any affection you know I wanna kiss.
I wanna be your light when the world is too dark,
I wanna be your decoration when the world is too stark.
What I wanna be is something for you that is real and true,
So how is this selfish if all I wanna be is there for you?
Because it doesn’t matter that I just put my personal wants out on a limb,
Because all you wanna be, is right there, with him.

 

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

ah. amazing writing here. the flow was a little shaky at times, but your words made up for it. thanks for posting it to the competition, it was truly a beautiful write, and you understood the concept perfectly.
bravo!

[Vaishali..^_^]

ohh...!it's a beautiful piece....great work..!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Again, a very beautiful piece of writing...
The repetition of "I wanna be" gave a very appealing flow to the text.