Industrial World

Industrial World

A Poem by Whitney
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I believe our world is becoming way too consumed in technology. We are becoming victims of it. I just wanted to write a little something about it. Using computer terms. Hope you like it.

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Coding forge activity
Money buys heartless machines
Product sensitivity
Voltage powered energies

Industrial audacity
Rebuilding heart's priorities
Maximum capacity
Spreading counterfeit disease

Burning circuit properties
Encryption of apology
Place your fingers on the keys
Keyword is technology
 

© 2008 Whitney


Author's Note

Whitney
You have to think deep to get the connection to all the words. It only seems irrelevant. But it's not.

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The diction and flow of this poem is amazing. The first word that comes to my mind whilst reading it is "intricacy". Very nice.

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Added on November 10, 2008

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Whitney
Whitney

Seffner, FL



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Hey there. (If I miss anything, or you want to know something, ask me, I'm totally friendly) I'm 19 years old. I love writing because I'm a fairly emotional person, and there's so many things in .. more..

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