What I Leave Behind

What I Leave Behind

A Poem by Whitney

They are mine which hits the floor
So many times I've seen before
My tears are forever falling

So many things are left undone
What's on my shoulder weighs a ton
These regrets I can't exchange

Nothing left to do but grieve
What I wear is on my sleeve
Liquefied rubies spill to the floor

My world has long-since turned to grey
What am I, but my own prey
My worst enemy mimicks my image

The pain; I should have thought it through
My ending above all, is what I knew
Burdening the world is a job I leave behind

© 2008 Whitney


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Ben
This poem i have to say is very interesting in my eyes and i love the line "Liquefied rubies spill to the floor" it takes a good writter to think of lines like that you are a great writter love reading your work i will leave more reviews on your other work once i get to them keep writting,

your poetic friend,
Ben

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 1, 2008

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Whitney
Whitney

Seffner, FL



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Hey there. (If I miss anything, or you want to know something, ask me, I'm totally friendly) I'm 19 years old. I love writing because I'm a fairly emotional person, and there's so many things in .. more..

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