Smile

Smile

A Poem by Whitney
"

The title isn't referring to a happy smile. Well.. perhaps it is.

"

Twist your finger in my wound
Send forth blazes from your eyes
Unleash your rage, broken character
For up my sleeve is one more surprise

I've deceived you one last time
Unaware of my hidden guile
You breakdown and start to cry
As I've released a wicked smile

You thought you had me trapped
That I was at my end
But you forgot just who I am
I have the power to fake a friend

© 2008 Whitney


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I agree with Ian completely. I think it's safe to say that you own at imagery.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Ian
Oh OUCH! That first stanza is killer, especially the first line. You certainly have a way with imagery in all of your poetry.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 26, 2008

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Whitney

Seffner, FL



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Hey there. (If I miss anything, or you want to know something, ask me, I'm totally friendly) I'm 19 years old. I love writing because I'm a fairly emotional person, and there's so many things in .. more..

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