Rape

Rape

A Poem by Whitney
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Abandonment of soul
There's a loss of self esteem
Judgment clear as smoke
They will never be redeemed

Justice never heard
Initiative unseen
Shaking so protrusive
And feeling so unclean

Self respect is shattered
Courage hides and flees
Endurance slows to snail's pace
Rape's a feeling such as these

© 2008 Whitney


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This is very sharp; it's to-the-point, yet it isn't rudimentary. Very well written. Awesome job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Doubt your self not, judge your self kindly these feelings are temporary and so are the people

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is amazing, and very well-written. Short and to the point. I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Extremely emotional and well-written. You chose the right words, and I felt each line as I read it. Very good work. ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow that blew me away. It is very good.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 26, 2008

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Whitney
Whitney

Seffner, FL



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