Out Of Body Experience

I've been fascinated with OBEs for a long time. I decided to write about it.

In a white and sterile room
There's a window by the bed
She lays in silence there
She will never lift her head

Not breathing on her own
Is all that I can see
I quickly realize
Who I'm looking at is me

She's lost all will to live
Her skin is cold as ice
Her life was one big gamble
And she chose to roll the dice

These must be our last hours
We ended up apart
Body and soul seperated
Wish we knew this from the start

Surely she must feel me
I lay down in her place
I think something is broken
Her body I can't embrace

A loud tune strikes my ears
The sun did cease to shine
Someone calls me from above
God said it's time for a Flatline

Reviews

[luke312]

Very Righteous the ending was righteous but not righteous i choose life but then again I'm in a good mood

[Violet Rose]

A very conclusive ending, yush. I liked the slightly-morbid sense of "Oh jeeze! What's going on!" in the beginning. The body did seem like a total stranger.

My advice, if you choose to take it or not - And she chose to roll the dice. Just take out the and to save the beat.