BOREDOM -Sleep Inducer

This is all abt the way students feel during his/her revision blocks wen they are left for self study n der patience gives way waiting for the clock to strike 4:30 pm when the school closes for da day

BOREDOM
- Sleep Inducer

Another sunny day!
With the noon at its bay
See the blazing sun, soaring high
In the noon burning sky

It's just another boring day
With open books n lack of attention to pay
Yes! It's time for the Revision blocks
N all are in groups with their jokes n mocks

With the most lazy mood
As I don't obviously feel so good
With the sleepiness overburdening me
I carry on dis poem, though I shouldn't be

As I watch, the clock strikes four
I realize just half an hour more
To kill some more of this boring time
I continue wid my silly poem

To compose a poem, one needs an inspiration
But at this time, da only thing that I feel is my shallow respiration
Again, wid the sleepiness overburdening me
I finished my poem before any teacher could see!

Author's Note

Comments n reviews are welcome

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to keep busy. Writing poetry does make the time go quicker. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tse]

Thank u so much for the lovely review, Coyote!

[Nikki]

haha I liked this, you put me right there in the classroom.

[Tse]

I am glad you liked it, Nikki ! Thanks for reading!

[M.A.Rathore]

A very fine poem with great flow of language but still you have to improve your way i.e. Keep off the messaging style ..use "the" in place of "da".. "with" instead "wid". This a site of writer not for only messages.
Keep writing..
Have a nice time!

[Tse]

Thank u for the kind review n I'll surely keep it in mind to minimise my short forms! Thanx again!

[armin]

well written, writing cool poems is always a great measute to get rid of boring routines. I like the concept. keep writing.
Do review my poems too, will be glad.

[Tse]

Thanx Armin for the kind words! I will certainly go thru ur works!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

ha ha ha!!!
awesome poem!!!
cleverly written............strangely, sometimes boredom does help writing a poem!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Tse]

Thanks for reading , Pushkar!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome:)