When Time Forgets Itself

When Time Forgets Itself

A Poem by Trusting

When time forgets itself we wonder..

   Will the sky fall apart, leading to the open gates from Heaven??

   What will happen?

   Will we survive?

 

 

 

  But have you ever asked yourself this?

 

 

  Whenever time forgets itself, will you create a new clock or just wait for something to happen??

 

 

  Whenever time falls apart, will you help the one who needs you the most??

 

 

  What if time only fell apart for you?

  You needed help, you needed a hand.. 

 

     What if time gave you another hour?

  Would you fix the mistake that led to the main point?

 

 But... what if... there was never a time. Never a God or Savior?

  Where would we be? Where would we stand?

 

Time and time again, you must ask yourself just one simple question..

 

  "What if time forgot itself?"

© 2012 Trusting


Author's Note

Trusting
I haven't been able to get on here for awhile, or even wrote anything.. (: but this poem is something to think about.

What if time gave way on you?

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I like the thoughts on time. I tell people to be kind in hello's and goodbyes. Never know when we will not see another again. I wish for many re-set of time to tell people I need and loved them. Time is very important. It is our most valuable item. Better to use time for happiness and try to find peace and love. Time will keep on ticking. Can't stop time. Can use the time wisely. A excellent poem. Made me think.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A lot of good questions you raise, to ponder. Though time is all we know, it is also an illusion. Splendid read and write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very smooth, really very deep. Time is something we made but we never found ourselves able to control it. Time is relative. But it always slips a away. Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting question. The actual measurement of time is a fallacy so that if time forgot itself would we forget time? Interesting metaphoric poem, nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the thoughts on time. I tell people to be kind in hello's and goodbyes. Never know when we will not see another again. I wish for many re-set of time to tell people I need and loved them. Time is very important. It is our most valuable item. Better to use time for happiness and try to find peace and love. Time will keep on ticking. Can't stop time. Can use the time wisely. A excellent poem. Made me think.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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