Its A beautiful Life

Its a beautiful life as you jump out the window.
Hoping someone will care.
Hoping you will be remembered
for what you did.
That's certain, in death,
everyone has something good to say about you.
Its a beautiful life as you jump out the window,
you'll see it all;
The family sleeping in the cold
starved to the bone.

You will see:

The man hit by a bus as he takes his son to school.
A couple in tears saying goodbye for good.
A soldier being shot in the desert fighting for you.
A man lose all he has ever loved;

Then you will see; not far from the sadness,
A crippled boy walk for the first time.
You will see new life brought into the world.
You will see a man meet the woman of his life
And then you will know that every single soul on earth,
if you look deep enough has a sad story.

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

Its a Beautiful life
Jumping out the window.
Hoping someone will care.
Hoping you will be remembered for what you did.
Thats certain, in death, everyone has something good to say about you.
Its a beautiful life as you jump out the window, ull see it all;
The family sleeping in the cold starved to the bone.
You will see the man hit by a bus as he takes his son to school.
You will see a couple in tears saying goodbye for good.
You will see a soldier being shot in the desert fighting for you.
You will see a man lose all he has ever loved;
Then you will see; not far from the sadness,
A crippled boy walk for the first time.
You will see new life brought into the world.
You will see a man meet the woman of his life
And then you will know that every single soul on earth, if you look deep enough has a sad story.
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Its a beautiful life as you jump out the window.
Hoping someone will care.
Hoping you will be remembered
for what you did.
That's certain, in death,
everyone has something good to say about you.
Its a beautiful life as you jump out the window,
you'll see it all;
The family sleeping in the cold
starved to the bone.

You will see:

The man hit by a bus as he takes his son to school.
A couple in tears saying goodbye for good.
A soldier being shot in the desert fighting for you.
A man lose all he has ever loved;

Then you will see; not far from the sadness,
A crippled boy walk for the first time.
You will see new life brought into the world.
You will see a man meet the woman of his life
And then you will know that every single soul on earth,
if you look deep enough has a sad story.

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Just wanted to show you a different avenue to this verse...it speaks much in the lines...yet as I read the work...the presentation is off...not the intended meaning -- that is prevalent in the lines --- but the way to put the effectiveness to the reader...its just a guide line...and you can edit it a bit more to get it -- where you want it...

[PeterTrust]

Thanks Glen

[PeterTrust]

Thanks Glen

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...