7

this is an attempt to come up with some religious material, increase one word a line.. ended on 7 because its the holy number.. so sorry its short hopefully it wont take away from the meaning

individual
 its   visual
needs no miracle
have faith in spiritual
but can't escape the ritual
listen to lies till their believable
hell burns, but heaven is just unthinkable

Reviews

[Moomin]

Really good attempt. Your words are honest and challenging. You are right, mankind have complicated spirituality with burdens and cruel doctrines.

I was particulalry interested in your last line.

You might be surprised to know that there is no such place as a burning "Hell." It is a development of the historical churches. Can you imagine Jesus, the "Prince of Peace" roasting a person over a hot fire?

Just a thought.

Good writing.

I wish you peace