Chocolate

By request

A silken whisper on my tongue
Breathes a word of soothing
It flitters and flutters
Full of fun
Away my worries are moving

A dreamy siren calls my name
The lullaby puts my aches to sleep
It spins and springs
A soothing song
Brings the rest of comfort deep

Waves of chocolate rush ashore
Wash my tastebuds afire
They blaze and they burn
A breezy brush
Makes my complaints a liar

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

The vivid imagery in this, along with the sensations called to mind by the title create for me a poem of feeling rather than something I can actually pinpoint why I liked it...but I do. It is almost like chocolate on the tongue...inexplicable.

"Waves of chocolate rush ashore" this image and the thoughts it brings is fantastic.

[ShelWars]

This is brilliant!

[Doctor JKC]

Classic but dry.
Dr.Callaghan

[Bubo]

Chocolate!
The words and thoughts it conjures up,like a dear friend, or a tease.........lovely warm piece!

[cest la vie]

When does the Godiva store open?
This is a richly warm, soothing write. Something about it's silkiness..Nicely penned

[qaralynn]

you make me hungry!! XD nice poem

[Tayler]

This is the first poem I've read about chocolate. I must say, I'm craving some right now.
Wonderful write. Reminds me of a Dove chocolate commercial.

[Emily B]

how did you know that was what I needed?

it's lovely and warm and soothing

thank you

[StoryTailor]

I feel ... this is nice. chocolate. ... I really wish I had some right now.