Ah, very tasteful. Tiger, is it just me, or is this going to be your profession? Where are your stories? See, to me, this could explain a whole paragraph of a story. So, really, you're still writing stories in a sense. Ah, cut the mumbo-jumbo retard-speak - it made me laugh! Loved it!
comical. one of the many important elements of determining a well done haiku is its humor. though there is always a western preoccupation with subjective experiences in determining what's funny, the nature 'ku tend to require a slight personification. i think this is definitely a keeper for you.
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