Haiku #4

Haiku #4

A Poem by Benjamin L. Weekly

Early morning-
Coffee sees his
pajama bottoms

© 2008 Benjamin L. Weekly


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lol, very funny and soooo true

Posted 17 Years Ago


Ah, very tasteful. Tiger, is it just me, or is this going to be your profession? Where are your stories? See, to me, this could explain a whole paragraph of a story. So, really, you're still writing stories in a sense. Ah, cut the mumbo-jumbo retard-speak - it made me laugh! Loved it!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hehe, very clever haiku!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL, so true, so true!!!! Great work!

Krystal

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

comical. one of the many important elements of determining a well done haiku is its humor. though there is always a western preoccupation with subjective experiences in determining what's funny, the nature 'ku tend to require a slight personification. i think this is definitely a keeper for you.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 23, 2008

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Benjamin L. Weekly
Benjamin L. Weekly

Roseburg, OR



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I am 22 years old and live in Roseburg, OR. I presently work full time. At my job, I handle second tier tech support by phone and answer emails for a major company. As such, I have the privilege of.. more..

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