Friends

Friends

A Poem by Truc
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Losing Friends

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Companions drifting away
No place to belong
If only I can say "hey!"
We can get along


My friends were the best
They were my everything
My heart is possessed
By these wild feelings


If I can only unwind time
I will use it now
So we have more playtime
If God will allow


I don't want to lose them
My precious companions
One more chat with "ahem"
Makes me feel more human

© 2008 Truc


Author's Note

Truc
It's how I'm feeling right now. :(
Not a good feeling. (Sorry if it's bad and wasting your time.)

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I don't think it's bad at all!

I recently lost two of my closest friends, and I was able to relate to this very well.

I think you did a wonderful job. :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2008

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Truc
Truc

San Jose, CA



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