Hope In Us

So long my friend...

Do you still have hope, hope that is felt in tears. Theres those who still have
faith that guides us in life. We continue to fight, for the love that I felt
through you. Fight with the hope in us.

Can we change the future tomorow? We look at the clock, hidden in the shadows of
uncertainty. Resistant, stubborn until the abyss of death. But if you do not
ignore time, time will show the pain that you stood through. Youre a brother, a
friend. We wont forget what his words meant, while theres life theres hope. You
can be the impossible your miracle. Even if it takes you to your end, confident
to break the bounds. Rising and cutting through wind. Crash and burn. The long
washed away footsteps in the sand... Just a pen in paper in my hand, the words
echo through my mind.

There is still hope now youre gone. Seems hard but the memories within us live
and serve as guidelines in each choice. We will still pursue the problems that
we face. The courage to hold another like a lifes line. The strong foundation
that poetic words cant express. Stop the disease of suffering and act as your
brothers. Sad to think that words are words when youre gone. What are those?
Words that are shaking with emotion. We also know that those words live
alongside you within us. Reverberate through our hands, our words, our hope
within us.

Our friend is gone, sealed away in memory. Come to together like a family,
struggle together without you here. Pray, cry, coursing with sorrow. Youre
bravery distributed like water yet it flows through our eyes like waterfalls.
You said we are given what we should use, those words shine within our eyes. A
dream of coming together, just a simple dream. A dream constantly out of reach,
constantly fading away.

I like to be among the lonely poet. Stronger than you but now weak as you flew
away. An inspiration racing through my hands, my eyes distant looking at the
sky. An angel has joined the clouds, looking back at me with the same eyes. A
dreamer among fighters...

The light of the day falls into the darkness but the memory of you lights up the night.

The moon shines your image shadows us all. An angel in the darkness like a forgotten dream...

　

Until heaven takes me, until we see each other again. Until then watch over me my friend.

I miss you already, a smile and tears falling from my eyes.

  See you in heaven...

Reviews

[Just Plain Me]

This made me cry...I couldn't imagine losing any of my friends...they keep me sane. I'm so sorry that you lost your friend. I love this poem though, it's amazing.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great tribute in remembering a friend. This piece is stunning and each line has a purpose. emotion is pour deeply into this piece.

[laceyjane23]

First I want to say sorry for your loss, this is a beautiful piece. A great way to remeber your friend. Keep on writing!

Laceyjane

[Matthew Kult]

I am sorry for your loss, but this was beautifully written. Very personal and heartfelt. He must have been someone very special.

Regards,

Matthew

[Liza]

this is so heartfelt
thank you for letting us read you

[Lydia Blackwell]

This is beautiful. Well done. I am sorry for your loss, but glad for your inspiration and hope. You take the things you can from a sad situation and you make them into something good. This is commendable. It is a lovely piece.

[Puzzle-bot]

A beautifully sad poem. Amazingly well written and phrased

[RonnieBreight]

Wow. There is life in every single one of these words. My favorite paragraph is "I like to be among the lonely poet." Every sentence in there is brilliant. I really like this, it's so... sweet and sincere. You did a lovely job. :).

[Sonita Pal]

Wow! What a piece of writing that is, it is full of truth and understanding and conveys alot of what people understand. Thank you for sharing all of your work with me. I have been unavailable for a long time and recently just logged in.. :) ps.. LOve the work..

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what an absolute gem...depth in words and a fitting tribute..